If you’d like to send me a direct message, please email me at julie@juliehedlund.com. I look forward to hearing from you!
-
Children's Book Author, Freelance Writer
Search
-
Join 27 other subscribers
Follow Me
Blog: Write Up My Life Topics:Writing, Life, Family Tweet Me
All Proceeds Benefit First Book!
Subscribe via Kindle
Come’n Get the Podcasty Goodness!
Popular Right Now
- WRITE UP MY LIFE HAS MOVED!!
- BIG Blog News!
- Debbie Diesen: May 12 x 12 Featured Author
- Monthly 12 x 12 in 2012 Check-in: April
- Perfect Picture Book Friday: Not Yet, Rose
- Book Spine Poems
- Tuesday 12 x 12: Julie Rowan-Zoch
- Gratitude Sunday 79
- Perfect Picture Book Friday: Too Many Frogs
- Tuesday 12 x 12: Dana Carey
Book Review and Resource Sites
- A Book and a Hug
- Book Dads
- Bookie Woogie
- Chicken Spaghetti
- Fuse #8
- GottaBook
- Guys Read
- Literary Coldcuts on Toasty Buns
- Picture Book of the Day
- Poetry for Children
- Seven Impossible Things Before Breakfast
- Teach with Picture Books
- The Children's Book Review
- The Miss Rhumphius Effect
- The Random Book Review
Editor Blogs
Kidlit Writers' Blogs
- Abby Fowers
- Adventures in Children's Publishing
- Alison Stevens
- An Author's Quest
- Angela Pena Dahle
- Anna Staniszewski
- Becky Levine
- Beth Stillborn
- Brenda Drake
- Carla Mae Jansen
- Carole Ann Carr
- Casey McCormick: Literary Rambles
- Catherine Johnson
- Cathy Mealy
- Cheryl Reifsnyder
- Christie Wild
- Corey Schwartz
- CYNSATIONS
- David L. Harrison
- Debbie Ohi: Inkygirl
- Deborah Diesen
- Elana Johnson
- erica and christy
- From the Mixed-Up Files…
- Gail Carson Levine
- George Shannon
- Heather McCorkle
- Ingrid Sundberg
- James Preller
- Jane Yolen
- Jay Asher
- Jean Reidy
- Jessica Stanford
- Jim Hill
- Jo Hart
- Julie Musil
- Kathryn Apel
- Kathy Temean
- Katie Davis
- Katrina L. Lantz
- Kelly Hashway
- Laura Barnes
- Laura Salas
- Lee Wind
- Linda Ashman
- Lisa M. Potts
- Lola Sharp
- Lynda Shoup
- Marieke's Musings
- Megan Bickel
- Michelle Markel
- Mo Willems
- Mother. Write. (Repeat)
- Natalie Whipple
- Operation Awesome
- Pass it On
- Patricia A. Timms
- Paula Yoo
- Picture Book Junkies
- Project Mayhem
- Rachael Harrie
- Rachel Morgan
- Renee LaTulippe
- Shannon Morgan: Daily Pie
- Shelley Moore Thomas
- Snippets From My Mind
- Steph in the City
- StorySleuths
- Susanna Hill
- Tahereh Mafi
- Tara Lazar
- Tessa Quinn
- The Paper Wait
- Write Up Our Alley
Kidlit Writers' Resources
Literary Agent Blogs
- Andy Ross
- Association of Authors Representatives
- Betsy Lerner
- BookEnds, LLC
- Chris Kepner
- Dystel & Goderich
- Full Circle Literary
- Getting Past the Gatekeeper
- Greenhouse Literary Agency
- Guide to Literary Agents: Chuck Sambuchino
- Janet Reid
- Jennifer Laughran
- Jenny Bent
- Jill Corcoran
- Kathleen Ortiz
- Laurie McLean
- Mandy Hubbard
- Mary Kole
- Meredith Barnes
- Nancy Coffey Literary
- Natalie Fischer
- Nathan Bransford
- Pub Rants
- Rachelle Gardner
- Red Fox Literary
- Sara Crowe
- Sarah Davies
- Scott Treimel
- Suzie Townsend and Joanna Volpe
- Vickie Motter
Publisher Blogs
Social Media, Marketing and Tech Stuff for Writers
Writers Writing for Big People
Writers' Resources - General
- Absolute Write
- Agent Query
- Elizabeth Craig
- Genreality
- Grammar Girl
- Missed Periods
- Northern Colorado Writers
- Publisher's Marketplace
- Query Shark
- Query Tracker
- Storyfix.com
- The Bookshelf Muse
- The Creative Penn
- The Prosperous Writer
- The Urban Muse
- Write it Sideways
- Writer Beware
- Writer Unboxed
- Writer's First Aid
You Need a Laugh
Archives
Categories
12 x 12 in 2012 Agents Authors Birthdays Books Children's Books Creativity Dogs ebooks Family Friendship Giveaway Goals Gratitude Sunday Guest Blogging Holidays Italy PiBoIdMo Picture Books Poetry Publishing Rhyming SCBWI Social Media Spirituality The Artist's Way Travel Winter Works in Progress WritingBlog Stats
- 89,577 hits
Hi Julie-
I googled rhyming picture books and stumbled across your blog. Like you, I am a writer, and like you, I was at the 2010 SCBWI conference. Small world, huh?
I am writing a children’s book but have written for adults in the past (freelance magazine stuff, etc.) The common thread is humor.
Like you, I am struggling with this rhyme thing. I understand there is a slush pool full of bad rhyme, but must we all be punished?
I am getting ready to send my book to agents, but I’m bummed about my diminished prospects. No Fair!
I like the sound of your “group” book, but I am a word nerd. My husband and I know many of the “group” terms but when we don’t know them, we make them up (for instance: a “snob” of poodles, a “squeal” of pre-teen girls, etc.)
Anyway, I just thought I’d write and try to connect with someone struggling with my same writer issues. Let me know your thoughts 🙂
Jennifer Paisley
Hey Jennifer,
Great to ‘meet’ you and thanks for stopping by the blog. I have a couple of resources that you might find helpful (I did).
I recently took a rhyming workshop with author Linda Ashman, and she suggested a book called “Poem Making,” by Myra Cohn Livingston, which is a book that teaches children how to write poetry. It’s great because it covers all the concepts of poetry and rhyming in very simple and clear terms. It’s no longer in print, but you can get it used from Amazon.
Another book I’ve been loving lately is called “Writing Picture Books” by Ann Whitford Paul. She covers rhyming and almost every other issue you can think of when writing picture books.
Keep in touch and stay tuned as I’ll be writing more about rhyme and picture books. Do you have a blog too? If so, I’d love to check it out.
“Beleaguered picture book writers everyone have all heard the news that today’s picture book market is tougher than overcooked meat.” I have no idea how long ago you wrote that, but indeed it still holds water!
Your extensive sidebar list of kidlit resources, writers, editor blogs, book reviews, etc has provided me with many a happy hour of distraction when Query Tracker et al have become moribund. Thank you for collecting such a lovely resource!
Has anyone uncovered a source for uncovering, with relative ease, agencies and publishers who are (a) not closed to unsolicited submissions and (b) have never stated “Will not consider submissions in rhyme.” Finding the needle in the haystack for whom conditions (a) and (b) both apply is tediously time-consuming!
Thanks for letting me get that off my chest…
Don’t give up! I remember hearing one of my editors (not my editor at the time) speak at a conference and clearly say, “Please don’t send me anything that rhymes.” And then when I had a consultation with him and he asked me to send him a rhyming piece he had just read, I asked him what was up. He said, “Oh, we don’t really mean that we don’t want anything that rhymes. We just say that because we don’t want any more bad rhyme, and that’s mostly what we get!” So, here’s what you can do to help yours not fall into that category…
1. Make sure every line adds to the story. Do not put in empty calories just because they rhyme.
2. Think about how you would say each line if it were plain old conversation. Where would the stressed syllables fall then? If you’re “cheating” a little to make it sound rhythmic when you read it, it’s not going to cut the mustard.
3. No forced rhymes or wonky wording. You know the ones. No one would ever put the words in that order unless they were trying to rhyme. It’s not quaint. Editors will stop reading.
4. No near rhymes. Around does not rhyme with down. No exceptions. Okay, you might get something past an editor who is not a rhymer, but do you want to?
5. Write in rhyme only if the story demands it. Most of my manuscripts are not in rhyme. Yes, it’s true that most of my published books are in rhyme, but they do kind of call for it. Check them out!
Hang in there. Keep playing with the words. Give yourself a break and call the next rhyming piece you begin a practice one. Play away! I’ll be cheering you on…
Mark land Manufacturing intends to increase capacity by overcoming a bottleneck operation by adding new equipment. Two vendors have presented proposals. The fixed costs for proposal A are $50,000, and for proposal B, $70,000. The variable cost for A is $12.00, and for B, $10.00. The revenue generated by each unit is $20.00. BSOP 209 OPERATIONS ANALYSIS ALL ASSIGNMENTS LATEST
The alternative to all of the above is to publish yourself. I too gave up a well paid, secure job to become a children’s author/publisher, but I’m not relying on others to like my work, other than the children who I hope will buy my books. It’s hard work, but with persistence you can make it work. I’m just about to publish my 3rd book (my first was published in October 2010 and my 2nd in October 2011) and am confident that I will be making a reasonable living by the end of this year. Look me up at http://www.amazon.co.uk/Kevin-Price/e/B0067XUF40/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_1
Would be pleased to make proper contact to see whether we can help each other (I’m hoping to find some outlets in the US in the near future).
information valuable and excellent design as share good stuff with good ideas and concepts lots of great information and inspiration both of which I need, thanks to offer such a helpful information here. BSOP 209 WEEK 2 HOMEWORK LATEST